Super Lori & The League of EVIL, DORKY TEENS!! (part 1)

Note: This was written before VickyTales came to be, and was originally titled "The Goddess VS The League of Evil Dorky Teens!" and was written in the form of a comic book outline/story. Th panelling configuration was not yet done when it was shelved. We have left it as it was originally, except for changing a few small details for continuity. The comic book never came to be, however, we are releasing this to show what could have been...

Dark. The town of Adamtropolis, the bustling city of 2 million people. In the distance, a siren goes off. Focus in on the location of the siren. Oh no! It's the headquarters of Adam Labs (a billion dollar lab that is creating dino DNA and a cure for AIDS - 800 and 150 scientists on the projects respectively). Alarms are flashing, sirens are ringing. Police arrive, but it is too late. The Raptors DNA, the first totally complete dinasour DNA, is missing!

The scene shifts to the secret lair of DET - Dorky Evil Teens. They are sitting around a table. One of them places the Raptor DNA on the table and the leader grins, as all the others smile. The leader takes the vial and holds it up infront of the DET ensigna on the wall. He says, laughing as he did, "NOW, WITH THIS, WE SHALL RULE THE WORLD!!!" They all laugh evily.

Back at Adam Labs, the police are looking for clues. The owner of Adam Labs, the mayor of Adamtropolis, Adam, is upset. "How could someone take my first 100% complete dino DNA? Now how can we open Adamassic Park?" The police comfort the mayor.

The scene shifts to the Adam Museum of Space Technology. A shadowy figure is approaching a window. "He" opens it and climbs inside. "He" makes his way to the hall of Cool Stuff. He quickly moves around, looking for something. Then he takes the SpaceCubator, a very cool incubator that allows a gravity free incubator, or a incubator for space (Depending on the setting). He leaves, triggering alarms. Police arrive and see, too late, the SpaceCubator is missing.

Police HQ. Comissioner Stefani is on the phone. "Two breakins?! WHERE?" She quickly activates the Super Lori symbol - a glowing, pink L in the sky - located near the seven helicopter pad.

The Mansion of Lori Mahogany, billionaire playgirl. The butler, Sophie, carries a phone. "It's for you, Miss. Mahogany." Lori picks it up but before she can put it to her ear, she sees the Super Lori symbol in the night sky. "Hold the phone, Sophie! Adamtropolis needs my help!"

She races to an unused spare bedroom. Pressing a button, the back wall flips around to reveal the LoriTubes. Sliding down one of them, she emerges as the beautiful superhero, known only as the Super L. Jumping into her LoriMobile, she speeds to Comissioner Stefani's place.

Police HQ. Our superhero and commissioner Stefani are deep in thought, talking. "Who did what?!" Lori's voice can be heard as saying.

"We don't know" Stefani replies. Lori nods her head.

"Ok then. Lori AWAY!" She flys into the sky, patrolling for trouble. She sees the police at AdamLabs and the AMOST, and knows it is useless to go there. She continues flying high in the air, a real godess of beauty. Down below, another shadowy figure heads for AdamPark, the "most Adamy place under the Sun." The person is thinking deeply. "He" must get part three of five for the device DET was building...

FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS...NEXT WEEK.

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